literature

Caste Away

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Hour after hour for the next five-hundred years
I'll defend this empty castle, letting no impure soul near.
I'll protect the crown and princess, I'll protect the outer walls.
I will stand behind your majesty until your kingdom falls.

I will test the food for poison, I will fall upon my blade.
I will fight for what I love until the life from my eyes fades.
I'll die for all these missing folk and all their lost lands, too.
I will die a million times to tell the princess "I love you."
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Marssamuel's avatar
for the next five-hundred years
I will test the food for poison
The rest of the lines are great and have a kind of fairy tale feel to them, but these two seem almost too modern. To be honest I don't know what to suggest. Something a bit more medieval-ish? :ashamed:
Way past by the way!
-Cheers!